by cnhemingway
another 5 star chapter , I love that you didn't just throw sex into the mix to speed things along i enjoyed it much more just reading about them getting to know each other . Cant wait for chapter 3 ! don't leave us waiting to long
I wonder if Christina and Stephen realize that things will be worse if they get married. Both will be stuck in marriages they are not happy with.
I'm really glad that you stepped back from immediate sex. Yes, a little short, but that's only because I'm impatient with stories I want to read! keep going, I can't wait to see where this story takes them... x
They way it's told is unique, the plot from what I can see is unique and much different from a lot of the sludge we get stuck with in the interracial tag! The only thing I would suggest is to up your diction. Obviously you don't have to go digging through the Oxford dictionary for a sixteen character word, but a lot of basic words like "look", "try", "saw", "talk" and "walk" are used pretty liberally.
Otherwise, a solid five stars. Keep up the fantastic work! :)
i am not mad at the shortness because it's so wonderful written. Please don't make us wait in ch.3