All Comments on 'Your New Rubber Maid Pt. 01'

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SissySalinaSissySalina10 months ago

Kind of bland, hope it is going somewhere. Shouldn't the slapping be grabbing over a knee and spanking?

xDarkAngel0xDarkAngel010 months ago

Should have a warning for non-consent. Sorry not a fan of brutality.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

not enough here to get interested. no need to continue. (still better than anything from Pink Purple though)

beta_sissybeta_sissy10 months ago

You jumped too fast into everything, but I understand what you were trying to do with the story. Personally, I like a lot more details to build an image in my mind of the situation unfolding. Not very realistic in this format, but it could make a good story.

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