by Areoki
I love the get it done, straight to the point Dana. Looking forward to James bringing her out of her shell.
all the anal garbage, especially the 'anal orgasm' part just destroyed any possibility of this being remotely credible.
Couldn't get to the second page due to All the mistakes in the second paragraph!
please make a second part to this! all i ask is that it doesn't say "like a pornstar" anywhere
total bullshit, she was supposed to be there to help him, not boss him around, you made him a wimp that let her control him, and tell him what to do. you need to proofread before you post, way too many errors that takes away from the story
Gross. The part about pubes on her face and the cheese? How are people supposed to find this enticing?
Re sexymeup, he always seemed to be a wimp, but why is that a problem?
Does focusing on her not sit well with you?
I think this is really interesting.
Good premise.
But rushed.
From zero to blowjob in a nanosecond.
Needed teasing/foreplay.
She could have asked him to show her the kind of porn he watches. And how he masturbates to it.
She could have let him eat her pussy -- for his enjoyment, not hers.
She could have used her breasts/nipples.
Three stars.
Ok, so I imagine that this kind of work relationship may become commonplace once AI gets more mainstream. Maybe not, but a fella can dream.