All Comments on 'Your New Secretary'

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Rainyday493Rainyday49311 months ago

Oh, wow, a cracking good start...

msgrant67msgrant6711 months ago

Dana is a great character. I hope she has more adventures.

geek37geek3711 months ago

Great story. Needs a sequel.

youjizz123youjizz12311 months ago

I love the get it done, straight to the point Dana. Looking forward to James bringing her out of her shell.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

all the anal garbage, especially the 'anal orgasm' part just destroyed any possibility of this being remotely credible.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Couldn't get to the second page due to All the mistakes in the second paragraph!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

please make a second part to this! all i ask is that it doesn't say "like a pornstar" anywhere

sexymeupsexymeup11 months ago

total bullshit, she was supposed to be there to help him, not boss him around, you made him a wimp that let her control him, and tell him what to do. you need to proofread before you post, way too many errors that takes away from the story

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Gross. The part about pubes on her face and the cheese? How are people supposed to find this enticing?

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This is a good first chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Really good looking forward to the next chapter!

Timtom12Timtom1211 months ago

Re sexymeup, he always seemed to be a wimp, but why is that a problem?

Does focusing on her not sit well with you?

I think this is really interesting.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Good premise.

But rushed.

From zero to blowjob in a nanosecond.

Needed teasing/foreplay.

She could have asked him to show her the kind of porn he watches. And how he masturbates to it.

She could have let him eat her pussy -- for his enjoyment, not hers.

She could have used her breasts/nipples.

Three stars.

rbloch66rbloch667 months ago

Ok, so I imagine that this kind of work relationship may become commonplace once AI gets more mainstream. Maybe not, but a fella can dream.

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