All Comments on 'Your Wish Is My Command'

by Dirt Man

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Your vs You're

You're is a contraction for "you are." Your is a possessive way of expressing ownership. "You're the best, baby." "Whose is it?" "Yours!"

BazzzBazzzover 16 years ago
Excellent imagination

A very good story. Your imagination is great. I would get an editor though. Some sorts of your story are a bit confusing as it seems you rushed through to get it on here. Still I am going to read your other interracially themed stories as this one was very original.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
excellent

Wonder if she knew who was fucking her. Great story, great ending.

noirdom92noirdom92over 20 years ago
Good story

The story was written with a very good flair.

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