All Comments on 'You're Nobody ... Ch. 01'

i enjoyed it so far.. many avemues to explore here and i did not miss the fact of your knoledge of super market moms period , so i know that will be told of at some point.

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I keep seeing Nick Nolte in "DOWN AND OUT IN BEVERLY HILLS".

Down and out in Beverly Hills. This isnt plagiarized is it?

Good beginning. He's got three ladies he can bang in the household. The ultimate will be the snooty bitch, Mrs. Klugman! 5 *'s

Cannot wait for you to write about the next chapter. Good back story keep up with the juicy details.

Youre a damn good writer.

For the read.

You write good. And I read good many!

But I got lost. Was it Mr or Mrs Klugman who ran over his hand. It seemed to keep changing, even though only one was there. The present one had to ring his or her husband by phone. All this and the poor guy still hasnt had his hand fixed.