All Comments on 'You're Not My Teacher Anymore'

Jim-dandy story!

5

Charming, believable characters in a delightful story, well-written and apparently flawlessly edited. What’s not to love?

Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

A nice/good guy acting with respect and integrity. Nice!

Well written

Loved it - all the way through! Excellent!

Very enjoyable read. Interesting characters and plausible plot. Well done!

Maybe slightly on the twee side, but did you pack a lot into a relatively small space. Loved it. 5⛤

Great story

While there is much questionable quality at this sited, there are some truly great Romance stories.

Old Dave has produced a simple masterpiece for all to enjoy.

The Hoary Cleric

A very _nice_ story, and I like nice!

Absolutely a fantastic story! Kudos to you sir.

What a great story! Sweet, romantic, and the good guy gets the girl. It sure put a smile on my face. 5/5.

It was nice. I think you need to use more dialog. Don’t be afraid of longer stories. 5*

I enjoyed writing this one thank you for the comments I will take them to heart.

As to making the stories longer the person I am using likes to edit stories under 10,000 words and at this time I am comfortable with the length. I am working on longer stories.

olddave51

I don't see anything wrong with the length of your story! Let Bh76 write longer ones if he so chooses. And he is a good writer. You should for yourself and then share them with us lucky readers. You can always divide longer stories into several parts.

Yes stories with parts is what I am thinking of next.

Again Boyd thanks for the comment.

Bh76 does have some great stories.

Funny, I am running out of character names. I like to use good, old-fashioned American names. But sometime a name comes up it turns out to be an old girlfriend's name of someone name from my family oops or a friend's name or a friend's wife's name..... now that took some explaining LOL but I did a rewrite and changed it.

Again Thanks for the input.

Kate was his wife before she was his girlfriend...

Old Dave writes stories about what life can be when people live industrious lives with high moral codes.

Fantastic reads!

The Hoary Cleric