All Comments on 'You're So Damned Cute'

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PrfsrPrfsrabout 6 years ago
its or it’s, your or you’re

You have errors with both words.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
is it finished?

It almost seems like you left a page out.. keep going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Loved it, with some caveats...

An absolute turn-on. Imaginative and well written. Typos and grammar could be fixed easily by a competent high school graduate of the author's preferred gender. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
HOT HOT HOT!

I would give anything for a man to talk to me like that in bed!

SoleBrotherJeffSoleBrotherJeffover 5 years ago
You took the time to write about minor details, but did you feel this story; I did

When you wrote 'You're so damn cute,' I was hooked with this story.

In my world, 'so damn cute' beats model runway beauty every time.

Great character development as expected from this quality writer.

The age difference made this story special.

THANK YOU !!!!

Jennylb22Jennylb22about 5 years ago
Very good!

I liked this story a lot.

HardXsRHereHardXsRHereover 4 years ago
absolutely wonderful

reminded me of my first lover, as she

was older than me. She was married

twice before I met her, and had one

child, a girl named Debra. Her first

husband took her virginity, and got

her pregnant by mistake. He only

married her for one reason, and that

was because she was a (24 y-o) virgin

as he was twice her age. She knew very

little about sex as she was raised in

a foundling home for girls. Her second

husband used her tiny body for his

pleasure as he never took her "bare-back"

After we met, I made love to her for five

years 2 and 3 times a week, as I could not

get enough of her smiling face, her tender

lips and her tight little vagina.

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