All Comments on 'Yrba's Travels Pt. 04'

by PaulGerard

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TrogCPWSTrogCPWSalmost 11 years ago
What? - No comments?

I read the story to this point without a break. It is so pleasing to encounter such a refined writing style with an adult story such as this.

BE is not really my thing, but I'm open-minded and it was the first few paragraphs based in the dungeons that drew me in.

Yrba is an excellent character, such a dangerously talented witch. Every bit of descriptive narrative fleshes the characters out.

Playful, erotic, immensely funny, I look forward to reading on.

I'm now a big fan and I thoroughly look forward to reading the full tale. I have enjoyed it so much that I'm considering paying homage by doing some artwork showing all the residents of the bawdy house.

Thank you for providing such entertainment.

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