All Comments on 'Yui's Awakening Pt. 01'

What a wonderful first story. I will be looking for the next chapters

Beautiful story

I’m also looking forward to further chapters as these two young women explore and satisfy each other.

Beautifully written and erotic.

Just discovered this series and I'm delighted to read your very sensual treatment of FF passion. Most of all I love that you stress the kissing and caressing of Yui's taut young tummy. Tummies are a much underrated erogenous zone and can be a wonderful part of foreplay. Well done. 5* - Leigh.

Nice beginning. I'm anxious to see how Yui develops in later parts. You have good descriptions, but if I may offer a suggestion. Talk about her emotions in more detail, how is she feeling, what are her desires and fears going on in her head. I think it will create more emotional involvement with the character. I understand you already finished this story, but in your future writing? Looking forward to reading more.