by JimBob44
Taking me out of my wheelhouse as only JB44 can. Phew! What a hot couple. Very sweet and sexy. *****
I don't think you need to apologize about your work. Yeah, the spelling was off in places, and there were many people in the story. That only made it more real. We don't live in a vacuum. You didn't lose track of the main characters, and neither did I.
I really liked Paula and Rosie. Laci's foolishness made me a little sad and a little mad.
Good work.
Yum yum ice cream. Sweet story.
Is it weird that I sometimes read this in a non sexual context? I just think that it’s a really good and sweet story! And yes, very sexy. I just,,, love this a lot okay?
Free Laci! Everyone loves a good redemption story. Time off for good behavior!