by ZachDocEight
The story became a complete train wreck as soon as the anal sex started. What's with all this attention to anal sex now days in nearly all stories; don't the authors realize its a very small percent of people who do it??
you had a warning in the first paragraph! Just hit the back arrow rather than complaining.
Wow, she's clairvoyant!
Terrible writing. Maybe take a beginner's writing course before inflicting more like this on us.