All Comments on 'Zach and the Young Girl on the Train'

by ZachDocEight

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
train wreck

The story became a complete train wreck as soon as the anal sex started. What's with all this attention to anal sex now days in nearly all stories; don't the authors realize its a very small percent of people who do it??

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
your issue with anal

you had a warning in the first paragraph! Just hit the back arrow rather than complaining.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
She told me her name was Kate and said I was Zach

Wow, she's clairvoyant!

Terrible writing. Maybe take a beginner's writing course before inflicting more like this on us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Really? ‘Do me.’

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Best to read my stories by Date. Some of my early work is Not the best, learned as I went along. Re: 'Zach Ch: 8 Part Series' stories were re-numbered by the ADMIN. The 'Widow' is a series and 'Powers' is the other. One 3 part story, "Zach Ch. 01-03 The Widow Farmer" got m...