All Comments on 'Zach's Dark Desires'

by BadColinBaxter

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

So freaking hot! Please please continue!

buzzie1969buzzie1969over 8 years ago
hot

Very hot, hope you write more. Loving it

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sick

Sick and perverted no one should ever be treated like this! To think someone could actually sit and think up harm to someone's body like this is sickening and perverted

BadColinBaxterBadColinBaxterover 8 years agoAuthor
OK Then...

Dear Anon, Thanks for your very honest review. Please don't read any more installments as I fear they will be of even greater offense.

As for the other commenters, and <3 ers.... (whispers) don't tell anon but parts 2 & 3 are almost done... ***COUGH*** Move along there.. Nothing to see here...

63lsmith63lsmithover 8 years ago
KEEP IT COMING

When I first started to read this, I almost stopped. But I kept reading and found it most interesting and hot. I am now looking forward too more chapters. I also liked your answer to Anonymous, that did not like it, however something must have interested him, for him to read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
hot

please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
HOT!

Please finish this story. You have one hot, sexy imagination!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Ok, that seem really likely that he'd be okay with some psycho kidnapping him b/c he could experience a fantasy. Wouldn't a better statement have been 'Where is that boy now?'

BadColinBaxterBadColinBaxterover 8 years agoAuthor
I'm the same at Sci Fi movies

Just not believable... #AmIRight

PG564EPG564Eover 8 years ago
Terrific writing

Love how the Man is leading the Boy into his own world of sexual perversion. Others simply see it as pleasure. I feel some of the things the Boy does.

Lovem2msexLovem2msexabout 7 years ago
Very hot

Part of me wants to be the kid. The bulge in my jeans proves that, more important is the fact that that my other head wants it too!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

I want to be the tied naked one!

Rwa4768Rwa4768over 3 years ago

Very hot, what can I say it made me hard thinking of being in the boys place.

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