by fireandlace0533
Hoping you‘ll write more! Seems like Zach is getting a taste for some guy on guy action
Can Zach behave long enough to perhaps consider giving his caregiver a blow job? He might find out it is not so horrible -- he may even like giving pleasure someone else!
How is it possible that he is living out his fantasy has not even jerked off? Even if it is to straight porn (not that I want to hear about pussies and all) but it seems kind of unbelievable that he has not nut during both of your stories.... like... the character is no believable anymore.
Damn. Hope this gets a sequel. It’s set up for one anyway. Also if he keeps checking out Anne does that mean he might offer to do the voyeur thing in front of her husband but then that could be awkward for the friendship. Also it would be great if there was a scene when he’s out with Anne and Zach and Zach gets jealous when he sees the guy checking Anne out.
As others have pointed out, Zach’s selfish behavior and general attitude and language sucks. If he wasn’t such a douchebag cheater he wouldn’t even be homeless. So do the comments and actions of his buddies. I find it hard to believe that all of them would be such macho asswipes. Living in a firehouse is all about the team, pitching in, all for one, and treating each other with respect. The paramedics are part of that team so then treating him like a maid/nurse/outsider in his own home is unrealistic and assholian. And the demeaning name-calling is too much - sissy, faggot, cocksucker - are all homophobic terms of disrespect when used as Zach does so it needs to stop. Justin should have more respect for himself too than to let this go on in his own home. It’s getting tiresome...