All Comments on 'Zaftig Submissive Treat'

I really enjoyed your story. I liked the way you developed your characters, especially Jennifer. I have to admit the watersports at the end caught me off guard. It wasn't too much; I'd say it was perfect for the infraction.

Mina24

was the icing on the cake of the

great character and plot development earlier.

Good story which led up to a realistic ending, just right. A sub has to do anything asked of them, and it was a fitting punishment, which all enjoyed!

my clit tingled throughout, thanks.

A good submission story. Well written, perfect characters, hot as hell.

But, I'm a pushover for a happy ending.

Not mean no? Submissive or not you're forcing her once she's said those words. Which makes you a rapist and worse. You both belong in jail. People don't treat their pets that badly.

If you people, author and anonymous, really think that a sub HAS to do what they are told to do then I hope you only play inside your fantasies. And the asshat brought her into the marital bed. Let the wife pee on HIM.

You are a submissive so you HAVE to do what we say!?! You ruined an otherwise promising story right there. I also agree with the previous comment that wifey should pee on hubby for the infraction.

But what is there, I loved.

I caught myself 3 times. My brain altered the picture to what you described. I realised that the people had ID. Bodies or faces or a gesture. You and my brain made it an alter reality7j0. Spread over 35 years rather than a week in the story.

Thank you.