All Comments on 'Zanny: Performance Ch. 3'

Sick.

Very hot! Lana

my pussy is wet now from reading this

This is what my fantasies are all about, but you put them into words fantastically. I came so many times; this piece was wonderful.

If only we could all experience a night such as this and live to tell the tale - well written!!!!!

This is what I always wanted, and the story left me...wet and dripping and excited. You wrote it so well, and your imagination is something to be admired. OMG I am still horny.

Wow. Just wow.

I've never seen a rape story done so well. I've read published erotica that's not as well written as this. I rooted for her every step of the way.

Dr Mab - you are the guru

That was one of the hottest stories I've read on this site. I must have cum half a dozen times during that story. Wow. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

This is one hot story. My one quibble is that you seems to have dumbed-down the whipping sequence. Whipping doesn't hurt after the first few strokes? Preposterous!

Still, you write really well; you must continue.

Can.t you count? You dumb fuck.

Hot but why oh why couldn't it end up being a predetermined thing and consensual

so good

So hot, in real life I imagine this would actually be terrifying, painful and unquestionably wrong. In the context of fantasy my pussy was pouting and very very ready for penetration.

it might be group sex but it belongs in non-con. Put it in there

Absolutely great story - well written - clearly 5 stars !

May be the whipping is a bit odd as it got BETTER after a while ;o))

And the men queing nicely to wait their turn is not the norm...

It would be frightening in real life. More than a woman could take probably, but it was so exciting. So raw, so...dirty. I found myself wishing I was Zanny, and wishing it was real.