All Comments on 'Zippy: Sis's Puppy'

However the SHIT HOLE stuff is not imaginative and is simply gross

Obviously not everyone is into anal, but that doesn't mean no one enjoys it. Your story was fun. A new twist that got me grinning while reading it. Well done.

I loved your story and it really got me hot! I wish Zippy was my new puppy!!

I liked the story a lot. The characters were believable and the plot was well thought out. I liked the imaginitive way you overcame the sisters reluctance to become physcially involved with her brother.

I enjoyed this story alot which means I really got off on it!I will have to go back and read your other stories.

i love the author's imagination.... with all of the angles having been explored here in Lit., I think it takes some imagination to do it this way. <p>

the only little complaint I have is, it's too short and so you don't really get to know the two characters other than their little in-house Zippy and Sassy play. <p>

but I thought the author did a very good job, having the brother --- and then eventually the sister --- going in and out of his dog role, being torn, in terms of (1) whether or not he should really go after her for real sex, AND (2) whether as a play-dog character or as he himself, the brother. <p>

the sister's role, though never explicitly articulated by neither author nor brother-character, was even more interesting: she's even more torn about having sex with her younger brother, but she's also horny like hell! <p>

in fact, I thought it was just hilarious! first, they had sex like dog and owner; then they had sex like dog and dog (the sister's reasoning was that she couldn't fuck a dog; nor could she fuck her brother; SO SHE REASON, she needed to become a dog also to fuck! <p>

and, then, finally, the did as brother and sister. but the narrator came back to the present, saying, no that didn't "ruin" our lives; we continue to live together and help each other emtionally and financially, but we saw others and dated others... though we still pretend to be Zippy and Sassy now and then... <p>

good job, author. that's really a good, short, clever, little ADULT mind-game story...

Very Well put together, thought out, and presented. Great imagination and great sex. What better combination is there?

That was the weirdest story I have ever had the pleasure of reading. You are a freaky genius. That was truly a great story and should have a follow up. Thanks a million times.

The premise of this story is truly unique! The writing is good, and the story moves along nicely. I want to read more of hotpup's work.

This is one of my favorite stories on here. It's so sweet. I hope you'll write some more lovely stories like this. I like it graphic but cute :)

A fantastic imagination. Thanks for sharing your creativity will the rest of us. Write us another one please.

very imaginative

a great read

very funny and erotic

i loved it keep it up hope to see more from you in the future

OMFG, that was hot! Very creative way 2 get past the sister's inhibitions, too, I think. Wish that I were so creative. Thn perhaps MY sister would become 'Sassy' 4 ME! LOL Gee, 'Zippy' is one lucky character.

:P

This is unlike anything I've read here, which is one of the highest compliments I could give you! Bravo!

I nice refreshing bit of creativity. I if not a sequel to the story, maybe one from the sisters point of view i think would be equally as interesting.

Thats one of the hottest and kinkiest stories I have read.It would have been further kinkier if bdsm and fetishes like blindfold,food and enema were also involved.I hope they will be considered when writing pt.2 of the story.Overall a good story.

plz... i hate such animal instincts

That was seriously the HOTTEST story, ever. If you ever feel the need to write something similar to this story, please, don't hesitate to do it. That was freaking HOT. :)

this story was hot and creative. keep up the good work. screw all the nay-sayers

Very nice story. Cute, and imaginative. Keep up the good work.

GREAT STORY

i fukin loved it

I fucking loved the fact that you fucked ur sis Mann iff only mine will let me

i wish if i could ever be my sis's zippy.

This makes me wish I had a brother. So hot!

Wish my sister would be my bitch! Would love to suck her large mounds and take her from behind

You did well!

i wish i had a sexy elder sis!!!!!!!!!!!

I absolutely love this, write more like it?

It was a fun story to read. The canine propensity to lick ass and sniff and nuzzle all over moved the story along very nicely. I agree with an earlier comment that this idea lends itself to bondage, D/s, lots of rimming and anal. It would be quite the feat if such topics could be incorporated to a story (or stories) while advancing the theme of a very loving sibling relationship .

this story was so hot , i hope you write all your stories this well... you have a fan here

JUST A FUN STORY.

GOOD JOB, LET US KNOW

WHEN THEY HAVE A PUPPY.

..THANKS IT WAS FUN..

Refreshing to get be something else good job

Great story.

Keep adding more delightful games.

Kooky, but fun. Thanks.

A masterpiece!