All Comments on 'Zodiac Girls Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Very well written

I always look forward to your stories, and this one did not disappoint. I thought the power struggle was brilliant, but I couldn't help but laugh at the end thinking of Johnny voicing his queenly commands.

MaxiJMaxiJabout 20 years ago
excellent

Wonderful smooth reading story. You kept me interested from beginning to end. Being an aries (04/04) I see those characteristics in me and you conveyed the feelings perfectly. Turned me on completely. Thank you. Cute ending though. Made me giggle! Jane

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Sexy Sexy

I loved it before and I love it now dr_m. Thank you so much for participating in this chain story and the idea behind it. You truly are wonderful. And a good writer to boot. Always, Elizabetht

Joseki KoJoseki Koabout 20 years ago
Wow

Very powerful story. Good scenes as well.

Man RayMan Rayabout 20 years ago
Well done..

Well done on an imaginative, clever and very sexy story!

msboy8msboy8about 20 years ago
Great Story!

Wow. You ARE very talented. I was enthralled by all of your story, you wove the tale well and drew me in. I cannot hold a candle to your story with my Leo submission. I only hope to learn to be a better writer.

damppantiesdamppantiesabout 20 years ago
Taut. Tense. Gripping.

doc, How do you do it? Is there a formula or do you invoke some spirits or something; or your Muse is linked to those Gods and Goddesses I suppose. Another one to add to your great bunch of stories. I had a tightening in my stomach all the time I was reading that. I was so captivated. And I guess I shouldn't tell you about the other places where the story affected me...

CoryleaCoryleaover 15 years ago
An Aries woman says hey

Hey, Doc. I was born on March 24th and have never believed in astrology, but if one gets to have THAT much fun, maybe I'll change my mind. :-)

Fun story, as always.

I see by your forum bio that you're an Aries, yourself. If you put an Aries man and an Aries woman together, do you get a power struggle or a conflagration? Or both? :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wow

that was great

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