All Comments on 'Zoe'

by Imbadman

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impo_61impo_61almost 8 years ago
Would be a good fantasy...but...

Would be a good fantasy...but it was just a porcine calling her mate a pig...So she deserved to have a pig for a husband...1*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Your last gasp in the story

Is her beginning planning for "his" next trip... who is he... the plumber or her husband?

If you are meanning her worthless pig of a husband, well she won't be married to him when that next trip happens. And she will be an ex wife the next time he takes a trip and either pregnant or nursing an STD. And her plan must include where the assignation will occur since she will be living elsewhere. However, on the bright side, she wont need to keep her being a slut a secret anymore.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
The next time "He" went away?

God?

wistful_of_ozwistful_of_ozabout 7 years ago
Descended into drivel and diatribe ...

... within first couple of paras, without providing a factual basis for her discontent or suggesting she was shallow overwought and hysterical.

I wasn't tempted to read further to establish whether either or both might be true.

Simplistic rubbish, it seemed to me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

so when does he find out he has a slut for a wife

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Whore

Another whore wife story by Imabadwriter.

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