All Comments on 'Zoe Parker Ch. 05'

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mickymouse113mickymouse113over 10 years ago
Emotional

I can really relate to the characters and I hope that Dad wakes up and takes action. The sharing some time together in Ch. 04 was a good start.

Roll on ch. 06 and I'm glad Zoe found some roses to smell. Hopefully they'll stay sweet smelling until she gets herself sorted.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
Excellent

Finally a reason to live. A friend for Zoe. Will probably become her best friend.

I'm so happy.

Yay.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
OHGODTHISISSOGOODIMCRYING

What can i even say? This is an absolutely INCREDIBLE STORY. I must say, its rather refreshing to find a story on this website that doesn't involve two people banging (its weird how most of the stories are about that, right?) and everything just...... how do i even explain it? It's simply amazing. Please keep writing. Maybe on wattpad or fictionpress or somewhere. I love these characters.

You. Are. Awesome!

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