All Comments on 'Zoë's Prospects Ch. 01'

loved your writing, however i am left wondering if they supersize the mascara bottles over your way??? all i know is if my boyfriend was only a little larger than a mascara bottle i would be crying...

Been reading erotica for quite a while on here, I definitely liked your style of writing, very unique. Kudos to you, can't wait to read more!

You had me "up" since the second paragraph...good work ;-;

saya <---

Threw me off because here they are the size of a finger. Perhaps they are different where you are. I did enjoy reading your story. The style is refreshing.

Definetely a very good story. Had me "interested" till the very end... and then over the next read. Keep it up, it was very, very good!

reminds me of my younger days.

One of the best and most realistic masturbation stories I have read. Love the way Zoe is constantly in touch with her FEELINGS and wanting to pleasure herself intensely, in just the right way, after that slow, slow buildup--then enjoying each orgasm to the max.

Is there boing to be a chapter 2??

Steve

Hey, she said the bottle fit comfortably inside her; that bit of subjectivity is all I need to know in the context of the story.