All Comments on 'Zoo Interrupted'

That was one of the more enjoyable 750 word entries I've seen here. The derision and threats from the son played out beautifully. I'll return to this one often. Five stars and favorited.

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I loved this! Needs a second part to detail the aftermath. Lol

On second thought, I have a vivid imagination!

I think I've read this one before but if not 5-stars. That is unusual for me, I don't think 750-word stories are enough of a story to convey enough content to tell the whole story. This came as close as any I have read.

Buuurrnnn

Absolutely fucking awesome.

Short, too the point and brutal. I bet the guy got the message as did the cheating slut.

WOW!! Quick and right to the point! Thanks for a fun read!

Yesssss

Way to drop that bomb!

I like this one.

Great story. The brick to the back of the head sounds like a plan.

Great story, AMM, I love it. The brick to the back of the head AND the baseball bat. The one-two punch, guaranteed for hospital time.

Works for me. 5 stars.