All Comments on 'Zoo Interrupted'

Good riddance to the Mom and a brick hat for the cuckolder. Nice.

Nothing like putting the fear of God into them! I get the impression that there's no hope for her?

A couple of nit picks. Gotta maintain my rep!

"This was the sort of restaurant where they offered tastings and a prix fixe menu. Graham could afford it." - While I DO believe they usually are, but tastings an prix fixe aren't NECESSARILY expensive..

"my son sauntered passed the maître de" - It's "sauntered past" and. "maître d' "

I'm giving you five stars for the name alone !

Well done

You gotta follow this up. This time the mom’s perspective knowing that her son knows and how her marriage now is beyond life support

Short and sweet. Liked all 750 words of it :)

750 words that made me laugh out loud at the incongruity of it all. Nice work!

Enough with the 750 word stories! 1*

this would have been better if it wasn't so short.

That was just a very good story. You left a lot of room to follow this with another longer story. You have the talent, give us more. Thanks for this one.

You got the Great Beginnings of a story. Please continue it.

that was a fun read. keep it up.