All Comments on 'Zorro Rides Again'

Never would have thought this could've ended like this.

Johnny is a bounder. Elle is a gold digger. Monica is a bitter woman in need of a lot of self-examination. Nate, though, is not only a bounder, but a full cad. Monica was abusive and started the hitting. Hitting a woman outside of self defense is not cool. Monica was dragged kicking and screaming into being Nate's lover - seems that's how she was able to come to terms with it? Slapped around and initially forced? And calmly accepts being passed on to a widower? Her only sense of worth is being the lover to a man -- any man? Hmm.

This was an interesting character study, but the only two people with any likeable characteristics were Erica and Abby, and even Erica moved on because of attention from a doctor (better materialistic prospects?). Abby gets her baby, but if she ever finds out the true nature of Nate, she will be a sad woman.

The first tale had potential. It was well written, but this one? Like Death of a Salesman, almost everyone filled me with loathing because they were all self-centered, misshapen souls. Again, it was well written, but I feel kind of icky. Don't want to bring the score down, so I won't vote on this one. Keep on writing, you have a knack. Just not sure about this one.

I mean the comic books. It almost reads like ARCHIE (dad) and JUGHEAD (son).

This whole family and friends are all fucked up,the ending came right out of left field.

Who would have guest..Crazy read

Was good until submissiveness (I stopped reading after the slaps to her face). This would have been if it had been written with pure mutual love between mother and son instead if the forcefulness.

Nate was a complete asshole, apart from anything else that he did, it is NEVER, EVER acceptable to hit your mother.

The ending ruined a good story