All Comments on 'Zorro'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
There just has to be more

The way you stopped this story I am sure that there is going to be more on the way. There just has to be a part 2, 3, 4? Can't wait to hear what she tells her son.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
OMG.....

What a great story...love it.

please continue this....i need more...5 stars from me !

Thank You...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
oh yes

You need to finish you can't keep us thinking of what happened.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
good story

But what a bummer place to stop i gave you a 4 because of that but really a, 5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
3 weeks Later at the doctors getting tested of vd

Or 9 months later their are 3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
You're going to need to add another chapter...

Great story in general, but now I'm even more curious what happens next!

ansdguyansdguyabout 8 years ago
Chapter 1?

If not I will be annoyed as heck.

boaman007boaman007about 8 years ago
More please

Yes I agree with others you can't leave us hanging here. Can't wait for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
EXCELLENT!!!!

Imagine how many times I would have to say please to get you to continue this story.......then double it.......then pretend I said it that many times.......You get the idea....IT WAS PERRRRRFECT!

TJSkywindTJSkywindover 7 years ago
I liked this

A lot of potential here. Mother seems to have anger issues. Is it because she only sees her success as the wife of the executive? Having the "right" parties, "right" social standing by what she wears / owns / club memberships?

PussyLickersRusPussyLickersRusover 5 years ago
I like.

Well written, insightful, keep up the good work!

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
ZORRO HAD SOME WEEKEND !!!!!!!!! ^*!^*!^*!

Well between MOM,ERICA,and ABBY, HOW CAN HE STILL BE WALKING. OH!!!!

IT'S GREAT TO BE YOUNG, GET AS MUCH AS YOU CAN WHEN EVER YOU CAN.

......THANKS

ToughSailorToughSailor7 months ago

GREAT STORY ! I'm desperately in need of the next chapter or two to bring to fruition . . . .

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