All Comments on 'Zorro's Girl Ch. 02'

One of the most realistic lesbian love stories I've read. Good dialog, very realistic. The whole relationship swing back and forth from friends to unknown to lovers just struck me as very real.

5/5

J

just loved the story,well written n so sweet

Delightfully erotic love story. Not sure you are inclined toward longer, more in-depth tales, but it might be fun to see where these two characters go. Regardless, keep sharing.

A near perfect love story. My sole criticism is that it finished a little abruptly. Still, that's just my opinion and others might disagree. That said, I loved it. Five stars for both parts.

Nicely erotic. Kinda refreshing to see some thoughtful hesitancy come BEFORE the sex rather than as later remorse and confusion. Thanks for the lovely story! ❤️

Nice story. I hope to see more from you.

I don't think anyone tells a love story better than Trionyx. This one is exceptional in that the two lovers' first contact with each other is in a one-sided sexual encounter. Whether auspicious or not, that encounter leads straightaway into the long process of forming a relationship that the protagonist is comopelled to examine from multiple angles. Finally, they make the choice to love each other and it explodes an even greater, more intense, mutual sexual union.

Delightful! 5 stars!

You are rapidly becoming one of my favorite authors. Personally, I think you should take a huge dollop of satisfaction out of the tributes the great Maonaigh pays you. I am humbled to be in his company. You both write beautiful stories and write them beautifully, and everything each of you writes has meaning and a worthwhile point.

freaking adorable, on all counts. i'm kinda an absolute wreck when my love leaves as well, so.. I relate to the useless lesbian energy meg had on for a split second there. amazing story, thanks for sharing it with us :)

Thank you, again, for an excellent story.

This is the last of your published stories as of August, 2023. I’ve looked at them all, read all but a few, and thoroughly enjoyed most of them.

I sm in awe of you writing skills and appreciate your insights into the human condition. You are on my Following list and I look forward to reading more of your gifts in the future.