All Comments on 'Zorro's Girl'

I have been in love with Zorro since I saw the first Antonio Banderas The Mask of Zorro movie when I was maybe 14. This story was perfect. An excellent dancer, a selfless lover. I loved the surprise ending. I thought maybe an older man, a Gardner or something. Wonderfully written!

Both the story and the conclusion. Caught up in it until towards the end a suspicion arose.

Possibly a follow up required??

I loved the story and would love to see a follow up. Only flaw: This has nothing to do with April Fools. Other than that, amazing.

Saw the surprise coming early (correctly). That didn't take anything away from the story. Really nicely written, Thank you.

loved it.

No...! I saw the Tyrone Power black & white version when I was eight years old (and that really dates me). No great surprise in this chapter but very nicely told and enjoyable. Onwards to Chapter 2.

HA I SAW WHAT YOU DID THERE! genius, utter genius...