Update:
Thanks to everyone who's offered up supportive words and helpful criticism. I'll take all that into consideration when writing Ch. 2 which I hope to have up in February or March! Please share the story when you can so I can still get more of that helpful advice from those who enjoy similar stories as I keep working to improve my writing.
I think some people might be interested in who specifically Jane resembles? Honestly a bit of Emma Watson and a lot of Eva Strauss:
https://www.xvideos.com/video2158910/iwia_fingers_herself
https://www.xvideos.com/video10109940/glamour_model_anal_audition
https://www.xvideos.com/video6568405/love_creampie_petite_teen_gets_massage_and_pussy_full_of_cum_from_big_dick
