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Click hereit is to feel
not to see
nails
travel
languidly
connecting
nerve
to nervous
static electricity
as if a grid
almost ohmless
covered me
your fingers
magnetic
pulled
from node
to nothing
heading higher
so insanely slow
sensations trickle
spiral up my spine
along with fingertip
mounted razors
painting
palest pain
as while trailing
dermic traces
lightning strikes
again and again
from haunting hands
to spine cord brain
then
raised neck hairs
meet traced ridge
at journey's end
peaked pressure
subsides
leaving me
in aching abstinence
of those digit
powerspikes
a second
an eternity
until soothing
silk sensation
of a pacifying
open palm
ventures back
to heal
every pinch
recently left
and fine tune
this mortal shell
A most sensuously erotic write
Exploring the power of a teasing touch to arouse
And from that same hand, the power to tamp down such fired up arousal.
Lovely alliteration, smattered rhyme and wordplay
with a developing metaphor.
The short lines work well with this one.
A fun yet strong read.
Well done!
....deliciously sensual....so many magnificent, tiny phrases. This is a delight.