A Sundowner (poetry challenge)

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The birth of wind
begins in the trees
an evening breeze
at dusk that settles,
nesting like fledglings
teetering on the edge
of spindly branches
tumbling,
eventually
swooping to embrace
a new day.

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Excellent poem...

that creates wonderful images. Very nicely done.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
peaceful

The whisper of the wind through the trees ~ it's vibrations speak of life uninterrupted.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Excellent economy of words

Of the wind in the trees

Overnight nesting.

Maria2394Maria2394over 17 years ago
wow!

the first two lines are wonderful. The rest is good too, but wow...you really started with a bang and not a whimper. Now I Have this image of the woind being born and its a soothing happy feeling. thanks!!

champagne1982champagne1982over 17 years ago
late evening is...

my favourite time of day too. Lovely.

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