- Non-Erotic Poetry
- An Invocation
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Click hereThere is catharsis in pain
gnosis in joy. Cry for the sisters of the
dawn, the blood-letters, the healers, the
dancers of the void. Feel their ache in
the cornerstone of your soul. Rise as
mist from sustenance, that which is
illusion. Break and permeate, you are
inseparable, you are beyond God, a flood
let flowing eternal, a shadow of a star,
the victory of ether.
Surrender yourself to yourself.
Embellish the ambiguity of time. Float
in the river of your dreams.
You are the artist to create. Paint the
scape you delve in.
The angels are in your tears.
Your water is pure and full of music
(muses)
- COMMENTS
tazz317almost 11 years agovisionalize and float with zephyrs, TK U MLJ LV NV
twelveoonealmost 11 years agoyou relook at this and do a hearty rewrite
There is catharsis in pain
gnosis in joy
grabber, but what are you doing? Is it supposed to be
There is catharsis in pain, (comma?)
gnosis in joy
or is the line supposed to mean
There is catharsis in pain and gnosis in the joy (of the catharsis)
toss this:
Feel their ache in
the cornerstone of your soul.
this is a dead kitten
reason I say these things, it is worthy of rewriting
5ed, despite a wince or two
greenmountaineeralmost 11 years agoIf this is Via Negativa, it's pretty good. If it isn't, I don't know what you mean.
Desejoalmost 11 years agoI like this because it does sound - evocative. I'm a little confused about what it is invoking, however, and by labels like the sisters of the dawn and "blood letters"?. It sounds cool, but I don't quite grasp it. The final (muses) also confuses me. I still like it though. I may chant it tonight and see what happens.
