tagErotic PoetrySweet Relief !!!

Sweet Relief !!!


Bladder was full !
    he writhed in the
uneasy pressure of liquid --
    sloshing to the brim !
at last , there was a "Gents"
   Sweet Reader ,thou knowest
what that means ----
   in that anticipatory relief
tinged with panic --he ran inside !
   his mighty phallus aimed & shot
streams of water ,jets speedy enough
   to make Fire Hydrants globally proud !
Sheer ,sheer Relief " Dear Jesus !!!"
   he sighed in pure bliss ,having
unloaded the terrific load
   which with a goad !
was telling him to release
   or else valve burst , dams
overloaded --worst case scenario --
   public humiliation of the macho Male
who wet his trousers to the relentless
   pubic gaze of the Peeping Tom
World , jeerers , peers , buddies
   & feminine ,dainty women --o horror !
he reflected "when a stud shoots jets
    of fertile , manly semen , he feels
the same pleasure of Pressure released --
    of Freedom from jail !
so as was said a century ago of a
   Famous Skirmish----c'est Magnifique !
C'est n'pas War !
   of the Sexual Intercourse he sadly
contemplated ----C'est Magnifique ! C'est n'pas Sex !
   It is Sweet Relief ! It is not Sex !!! "

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