by WriterDom
Great story...now if you will excuse me... time for my release..LOL
I am breathless, speechless, completely amazed.
Your words have touched me...I struggle to even pick one thing I liked, for I loved it ALL!
Thank you...
The whole thing had my head spinning from the start... already an avid reader of your work, this tale had me anticipating from the beginning.....
As always!
Absolutely amazing...I had to remind myself to breath a couple of times. Great flow and balance to the end.
You know that you are reading something that touches your very center when you find yourself moving with the words. Well, this was "moving"...great work! (as always) Any chance we can get more?
I read this story the first time casually two years ago when I started to explore this site .Then I didn’t know well what I was reading about . I was fascinated by your writings but at the time too shy and intimidated to leave a comment . Now as the story was lately linked to a thread I had the occasion to reread it and because of my recent experiences I have read it with more awareness and a greater knowledge of its meaning . So if I look back at these two past years and at the changes in my life I can surely say they have been stories like yours, among other things, which helped me first to give a name to the nameless yearning I have always felt deep in my soul and mind .
Thank you .
Absolutely loved it!! Felt as if I were the one in the room and not her. Very nicely done!
It was a great pleasure to read this story, thank You for sharing it with U/us