All Comments on 'Her Brother Ch. 01'

That was delightful and just plain hot! I am so glad she sent the texts first. I'm really not a big fan of cheating stories. What a piece of work she is. Good riddance to her. I'd gladly tell her off if it was me.

That's all that needs to be said.

I love all your work and this does not disappoint. Love the build up, next chapter please 😀

So sexy.... I love this story.... I would love to find a boyfriend like Julien.

They need to move into their own place without her. Neither one of them need her nasty ass hanging around just to tear them apart. I hope she meets a guy just like her that gives her a good dose of what she's been dishing out. I hope it's the first guy she's ever loved, and I hope he guts her. She needs a good dose of humility.

Fantastic story! Can't wait for more!!

Such a lovely story! More please!

Such a sweet lovely story. Hope everything works out for them

It was sweet. I liked this story. Was just the right amount of everything. There were a few parts that were ehh but overall great. Can't wait for more. I look forward to the crazy ex girlfriend to get what she deserves.

TM

very good like the story line and can't wait for more

Excellent start to a new series!

Can't wait to see where this is going to go.

Such a great read!! Lise deserves all the unhappiness that her life will be and I hope she suffers. I'm worried there will be backlash for the guys tho. It all happened pretty fast. Im in their cheer section tho and can't wait to read where you take them all!

Thanks for writing and submitting!

Beautifully written, excellently paced. So pleased that you took the time and effort to let the situation grow and develop, with sweet and tender explorations building to a steamy and erotically-charged climax. All 3 characters were perfectly drawn. You have set a very high standard for subsequent chapters. Looking forward to seeing if you can meet the challenge! 5 Stars. One of the best stories posted in this genre in a very long while.

New angle, well written, perfectly proof read and just delightful, even for an aged white haired pervert like me....so gentle and crafted. Not just a one pager but enough meat to really delight. Very much looking forward to part two......

I don't usually like the long stories but this was most definitely an exception I felt like I was there and can't wait for the next chapter

That was wonderful, your writing was filled with such passion. I realy enjoyed this story. You are very talented. Can't wait for them to give lisette a piece of their minds.

Please write more. It such a wonderful tale and I wish to know what'll happen when the sister comes back.

Wonderful. Keep going!

Magnificent! Wow! You created characters we cared about. You developed a wonderful narrative, and the sex was amazing. You made us feel the genuine love they shared as they explored each other. Great job! Looking forward to more.

What a great story! I could picture this actually happening to people i know that had similar experiences. I was drawn into the story from beginning to end!

Loved it great story please some more

and she's such a bitch! i'm so looking forward to the next chapter :) i'm sure i won't be disappointed, your writing is always wonderful!

If there were more stars on offer I'd give you a million!

This story was simply divine perfection. Thank you for sharing and I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

I had to give you five for sure, well blush I also ejaculated while reading this, wish I could find a nice young man to take this older person, I love a cock in my butt, it has been so long since I have had one in there or in my soft warm hands or warm wet mouth, I so need it. da.cd@frontier.com

Great story, please hurry with the next I chapter.

Such a great story! It was a long build up but one I enjoyed immensely. I liked this one so much I even created an account so I could favorite it! Definitely looking for more

I loved it, and can't wait for more.

OK, this was one of the best stories I've ever read here, you must continue please! This was amazing!

awesome writing, loved it

Please continue this, it was amazing!!

... but I have to learn more patience. I commented already, but I just wanted to let you know that the story is still wonderful, even after the third or fourth or fifth reading.

hmm... need to learn patience ... now!

It is ridiculous how excited I get every time you post a new story :)

This is one of your best; the plot is distinctive and exciting and the characters are simply charming.

Thank you again <3

sex story long winded and dragged out. however a part from that the story was a refreshing one.? i hope your going to add more to this story , i will be pissed if you dont i want to know how that cunt of a sister takes it. the bitch ... keep writing and add to this please.

Loved this story hope u post the next chapter soon can't wait .

This story made me so mad. I could not stop reading it. When I saw how long it was, no pun intended, I said that I would not read it. then I started and said I would read it only until they had their first kiss. The scene on the balcony that first night was really nice. Next thing I knew it was getting late so I had to stop reading. I surely went back this morning and just had to finish it. What a great story. And all that was Chapter 1?

This could be a novel.

The best part of this story is not the gay sex! Although, the sex was artful, passionate and irresistible! Once I got to the "good parts" I couldn't stop reading. And, shocking confession, found myself unable to resist pleasuring myself right along with them. The best part was the female character. She deals with men as if she can make them the perfect woman! She is not alone, many women do this to their men. A smitten man will tolerate this but only so long. Once the glow wears off the relationship will go downhill. She will become more and more frustrated with him and he will wonder what he ever saw in her. It may not end in a gay love fest but it will end. I hope this story is not drawn from the authors experience but instead from observation. In any case it should open the eyes of readers engaged in this kind of relationship.

Quite simply , PLEASE WRITE CHAPTER 2

I can't wait for the second chapter!

awesome story. with all the love and the beautiful moments. somehow a perfect story and a real one all-together. beautiful.

What a great sexy story. Cody and Jules really get to know each other "inch by inch" when they make love. How about a description of Cody's body? I imagine he has a dustng of beautiful and soft chest hair on that magnificent muscular chest. That would really please Jules and turn him on!

i would love to have a julien in my life ♥

This story is so sweet, I've been up until 4am reading with a little sleep in between, heading on to ch 2! Laughs :)

Makes me sad.

Your writing skills are superb

The way you explain things. . . whoa

This author knows how to create characters who reach out and grab hold of the reader and will not let go until the story has been told!

I like the transvestite stories more. But they way you wrote this, I fell in love with both men. You have a talent my friend. Keep writing more about these two, I beg of you.

I could not stop reading! Waiting for the next in this (hopefully long LONG) series.

Simply perfect!

The best fucking story I read in hear, you are an wonderful writer!

Amazing story. keep up the good work

I just started getting into gay porn stories, and i've had the most difficult time trying to find a story that not only captures my interests, but also the right genre. I am not attracted to men, but i love little gay twinks. So being that this story was about a straight guy finding himself being attracted to a younger, smaller, feminine guy was something i could connect with. I have had a very difficult time trying to find gay twink stories, so i was very fortunate to come across this story of yours. I hope that the rest of your stories follow the same type of gay genre, and if not maybe you could recommend me some authors or stories that specialize in straight/twink stories. Thank you.

I love how you made this both romantic and hot, without getting sappy or drift into cheesy porn-cliches. all in all just a perfect story!

This was absolutely incredible! Outstanding work!

This is the most sensuous enthralling and raging stiffy story I have read. I love kind sensitive guys who know what a wonderful interaction is all about. Keep going forever.

yeah,, I'm super horny right now,,,though I'm a girl,,, what can I do,, I'm a fujoshi,, I have read lots of yaoi,, I like the author yamane ayano,,, who draw finder,,,,,,

I could not stop reading.... This needs to be a book I want to know what happens next!!!

this had me turned on and i am a female, good god more please

Nooo don't go to sleep yet clean up and sleep separate or at least with clothes so when she comes home it's not obvious you fucked her brother yet. Cause that will be another shit storm in itself

This is, without question, the best story I have read here. I experienced every emotion of the characters, their despair, hurt, excitement, desire, joy... All of it! Every moment... OMG. What more can I say? Beautifully written. Just so happy to have found it... Thank you so much!!!

So tender and so well-written. Cody and Julien both needed to find someone who loved them for who they are, and they did just that. I loved the affection that rapidly grew between them and Cody's desire to protect Julien. Then the desire emerged, followed by wonderful passion. Thank you for sharing it.

Simply marvelous!!!! A true love story❤

The cutest story ever. so emotional, so true. just beautiful. I sincerely thanks you for that expeirence.

I just love this wonderful story. Cody and Julien are adorable. They deserve to be happy. Hopefully they can untangle themselves from the little witch.

I love it when a straight.man discovers true love with a gay man I have known some many married men living a straight life when who have gay sex and wants love from but stay unhappy with a woman. This really touch my heart

I knew someone like Lise. When my best friend broke up with her, she tried going to me with how she was alone and blah blah blah. I put up with her long enough to dial the phone and have John tell her that I wasn't into witches like her.

Threw her out and turned on the sprinklers.

these names remind me of some tv characters (julien with his best friend miles) that I'd rather not think about while I'm reading porn

Lisette is so realistically toxic that I had to skim past her parts and Julien is so cute I honestly cannot.

I feel the characters are too exaggerated. Lisette is too mean, Cody is too spineless and Julien is too needy. Moreover it takes too long to get to the sex parts, so I lost interest before I ever got to any.

You write very well but consider being more concise.

It was interesting but in the end superficial and at times over-blown and florid.

I love this story. Hoping Cody and Julien end up together in the end. Cody deserves to be loved properly!

The attraction between Julien and Cody seemed immediate and like LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT. Lise reminded me of a character in a video game who was toxic and controlling. The character in the video game got hers, and I hope Lise got what was coming to her... A life of misery and regret. Julien and Cody, I hope, knowing this is fiction, find happiness.

I loved this so much as my sister is staying with me and you have described her to a T.

This has gripped me from the start to the end..

The fantastic way you built up to the final love and sex was brilliant.

I was hard and very excited from the start.

Thank you for sharing your experience in this story.

S this is the story of my life to.

Shockingly realistic, actually.

An excellent story very romantic and sensual!

Very good...the characters situations were subtle and nuanced...the sex was erotic. After the first page and a half I settled in to read this with pleasure, and a bit of envy. Most gay romance stories are kind of boring but this one wasn't, not at all. Oh look, there's a part two! Smile...Now maybe I will get the hear them say they love each other.

Now that's a love story... I wish i was Cody discovering real love in an unexpected place.

A great read!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It couldn't have been more realistic. Your adaptations of these characters were spot on. It sounded like real family conflicts.

Awesome Gay Love Story! Julien, is such a Sweetheart! I'd love to play his role!!!! And Cody is a fantastic, understanding Lover!

Ooh to do a threesome with them would be sooo very Dreamy!!!!

Lovely writing, I'm a Fan!!!! Thanks, 🔥❤ Nikki