by twofourthree
Here is the story that conquers all odds and make it better till the end....I must say this one of best read so far....thank you for sharing.... 😋
I enjoyed this series and the character's you created, Thanks for your time and effort.
I would have loved to have Nancy and JB make love to each other, while Butch and Clare "spiced" each other.
Very likeable people. Good sex. Clare especially is adorable.
A big 5*
I look forward to be reading all your stories.
sanser6
I've read all your stories so far, and apart from some odd phrases, typos and misspellings, these are some of the most moving and engaging stories I've so far read here.
i really wish there would been more chapters i would a read this repeatedly
This series is one of the best I have read. It wasn't just sex,not had a story. Pulling herself(Clare) out of the depths of horror, and abuse in any form is horror, was the best part about this story being so great. I was rooting for Clare and I wanted everything to work out for JB. They both saved each other. I believe his success had something to do with his love for Clare. When Clare got pregnant, it gave the reading something more to cheer on. I am very happy for both of them, and all of their close friends. Life without happiness is truly a unfortunate waste! Very well done!
It was told in a way although taboo, It really didn't seem that way. I read all of the chapters non stop. I hardly ever do that.
I've read this story numerous times, every chapter. This story is moving. I urge everyone to read it from the first chapter to the last.
A truly marvellous read. Did not stop from the first word to the last Thank You
Sorry, accidentally clicked 1 star, should have been 5. Loved this series, well written with good well rounded three dimensional characters and some great sex scenes too.
It's incest but not really. There is more to the story than just sex between a nephew and his aunt. It is a well developed love story with a hint of danger as well as spousal abuse.
This is one of the best stories I have read. It is well written and conceived.
its a perfect story of nurturing back to health and sanity ...Why judge , good for the goose is good for the gander.....I truely think things happen for a reason...End of story and give this one a 10....even though I have never experienced incest....this one was about love and deotion...I applaud with standing novations..........Smiles warmly at the sistuation that went and bloomed into a field of roses all color of them
Its a story which makes you really fall in love in again and again, really loved this its really .......... cant write more, just feel it........
This, my second reading of this story helped me understand the wide variety of issues address and the loving manner of addressing them. It was a pure gem to read again.
What a wonderful love story!! I hope you have some more stories about them. Please keep writing!
I just reread the story and I am still in love with it!!! You may have been telling the truth, but you are a wonderful storyteller! Please keep writing, you have a wonderful way with words!!!
JJMemaw0623, the author wrote all these stories in a 3 month period in 2015, I doubt we will see him again anytime soon. We have to agree with you thou, it is a great story and both feel it ended too soon but as they say. All good things come to an end
This is by far the best story i have ever read, reminds me of my wife. I even suggested it to my son who is 23.
DAMN, THIS IS ONE OF THOSE STORIES, WHEN FINISHED, LEAVES ME FEELING LIKE I JUST LOST MY BEST FRIEND. DON'T KNOW WHY. BEING A RETIRED SENIOR EDITOR, THIS IS A STORY THAT WOULD BE AT THE TOP AND UP FRONT ON MY DESK. THANK YOU!
This was a beautiful story and I had a wonderful time reading it. I feel like I know the characters now. Thank you for sharing!
What a fantastic story. Clare and JB are incredible people. So glad Clare has been rescued. So pleased the story had been shared.
Love the story, Love the characters... Just ONE thing I think was missed or not told is a better way to put it.
What did JB write on the note as to why he LOVES Clare?
now I know he does and it dosn't really matter but I would have Liked to know what the Author came up with. I have read a couple stories like this where someone wants to know why someone loves them and I find it interesting on how they explain it.
I believe Clare came to a point at the end where she knew and didn't need to read it really, but I think if that's where the Author decided to take this it should have been closed at the end like... Clare making a show of ripping it up Jay asking why and Clare saying she knows and doesn't need it (if the Author didn't have something really to write in the note)
Something like that or it could have been his dream on the note.
Like I said it doesn't really matter just curious.
I LOVED this story. Amazing people with amazing lives. Strong people with brilliant minds setting aside their personal problems to find salvation in caring for others. Please write more stories like these. So fascinating with happy endings.
With just a little more filling in on the way a 20 year old man changed other people's lives and made his way thru the mine field of life. The sex becomes secondary to his
rise above the pitfalls that would throw most people into utter despair. I figured that Odell had told Clare that she couldn't have children but it wasn't true. I was kind of glad when she got pregnant. Clair's innocence made a GREAT counter point yo Jay's compassion.
What an amazing story of life and love. Truly one of the best stories I’ve ever read. An emotional roller coaster highlighted by sexual undertones. Well done , looking forward to your other entries
I have read many stories over the years, this is with out a doubt the best ever! To be honest it was very emotional and I did tear up a couple of times!!!
Thank You
Dave
This is by far my most favorite story I've ever read. It has the sweetest ending to it
This is definitely the best series I have read on this site! As someone else commented, the sex becomes secondary to the amazing pathos. The naivety of Clare adds a beautiful touch and the humour also adds a great touch. In the preamble, it is said that this basically a true story and I would like to believe that this is so. I look forward to more.
This was a good story. It was well written and the characters were captivating. Although I think Claire was a bit too naive. Regardless of the control that Odell had on her life, it is unrealistic for a woman of her age to so clueless. Perhaps the author wanted to portray the character as having “child like innocent” but it just doesn’t match with circumstances. Overall it was a great read. To the author; continue to develop your talent and I look forward to more of your work
I thought several times she might be "slow" or mentally retarded (at times during the story). I guess it all comes back to being sheltered.
Absolutely Amazing... a story of love commitment passion survival trust & all of above the lovely bond in the relationship as well as with the people around you. 👏👏👏💐💐
EXCELLENT.
A tale of romance in the face of adversity. Congratulations on a beautiful story.
I liked it shows that there are some that can accept a broader view.Wasn't just about how they had sex