All Comments on 'College Apartment'

Maybe a bit too much like a sexual technique manual, but pretty hilarious and a very fun read. Wonder where this young lady was when I was in college. Keep it up and ignore all the people who will probably go batshit over grammatical errors or ethical concerns in fiction.

Very clever, Vibrant, economical, arousing.

"Cloe. Sucking cock"

Best introduction I've ever heard.

Ethics in fiction? In erotic fantasy? C'mon, let's get it on!!

When do we get to meat his next two roommates?

Please explain what I have written that qualifies as ethical comments?

Grammatical errors? Please identify.

I enjoy such punchy short stories. Your take on sex seems familiar- a partner who is poly-amourous finds sex to be fun, and different to relationship.

In terms of moral / ethical dilemmas, I suppose the girl has no way of knowing that the guy is clean or would welcome being sexually molested by a stranger.

If a guy reversed the action, it would be in "rape / non-consensual" stories, not in "erotic couplings".

Then again, it is a mixed dorm, with randy teens....

When I was a teen, I think I would have enjoyed a girl doing that. Hell! I still would!

The story itself has as main characters people with no ethics or regard to personal health/safety.

Thanks for the comments.

Unfortunately, I remember being lax about such when I was young and stupid.

Seems like way too many kids still are. And "adults" too.

Yup. If it was a guy first it would have been a bit too much for me as well.I am all about women giving clear consent. Would have needed more seduction.

But then the surprise would be different.

Only defence: The were not drunk in a car after meeting at a bar.