All Comments on 'Bahamian Black Itch'

formula used a hundred thousand times before.......... white wife succumbs to the myth of the bbc........... all black men hung like horses.............. boredom ensues....

next time try for some realism and maybe be original....... your stories are probably popular with black inmates in prison.............. =P

Unlike some others, it's refreshing to read how randy a woman can get when she's getting something she really needs! The end of the story may be known, but it the journey that stokes the fire!

I'm glad to see that you are writing again, and I hope that this is the start of more regular stories. This one was fairly decent, but felt a little rushed in places. I wouldn't mind seeing a second chapter with Lara and Karen having fun together and with more black guys.

Tried and true concept

But you always put just enough spin and human desire into it to make it excellent

Why why why do we have to read the same repetitive stories! And its just as well this is a fantasy story because if a woman's cervix was penetrated by a penis, she would bleed to death - proven fact!!

Stormbringer is back! You are one of the best writers on this site. Great story and can't wait to see what else you write.

Like the deep penetration on this story! Also like the fact that they were ugly, yet the women were overcome with lust. Me and the wife enjoyed this one very much!

Great to see you back mon!

8 pages that held my interest. Good job and thanks for sharing

damnd nice Story but that is typical for you storm. i guess both ladies will get black babies and their marriage will be over. they leave ted and ray and will live together and raise the Kids while fucking more black guys and each other. what do you think guys?

stormbringer --

you really brought the A-game to this one ... one of the best stories on the entire site :) thanks for sharing and hope to see more new stories soon

Thank you for continuing to write - I absolutely love your stories (Patriotic Duty got me hooked). I cannot wait for your next one. Thank you, thank you.

I need to visit Jamaica

not the only one to find the whole BMWF thing far from a turn-on and just chilling! BBC stands for Bullying black and criminal -- usually! And do the white women really want black babies, or do they just want the cock without the consequences? Pity the white guys in this and other stories....

I'd like to hear the real story whether women really don't even feel the average penis after fucking a large one. There are perfectly good threads to be found on the internet -- although not on the size-crazed Literotica site -- where being large is actually a big liability for men. Oh well.

And the heartless Cunt wife hot and clearly hates the loser husband. That just turns the story into pathetic crap. That s a big turn off. This could have been a great story if the wife actually loved and cared about her husband. Too bad this is the former.

Love larger than life characters and slut wives. Keep up the great work. Forget the critics that somehow have forgotten they are reading smut. How on earth did they think they were reading classical romance. Don't they know they got to pay for that shot?

You're a great writer, but you already know that. Xoxoxox Annette

Upto and including page 6 fantastically erotic

Incredible story. Excellent buildup and the perfect balance between story and sex.

Great story!

Best story i have read. Hope there is another chapter.

Reminds me of when my wife and I first went to the Bahamas. The second night we had a black man approach my wife to dance. By the end of the night I was sitting in our room watching her take her first black cock into her pussy.

Did he knock your wife up with his kid in her.took my mom and aunt on vacation with me and had sex with both of them bareback cum in their cunts and knocked them both up sametime.were for two weeks when both had morning sickness looked at both said well look who is pregnant.we had fun in same bed king size my aunt said I ruined my marriage and mom too.told both of them when get back file for your divorces.the three of us living together and they each had three kids told them two sisters fucking young guy end up getting pregnant.

lecz dobrze by było,gdyby Lara i Karen zostały powalone przez tego ogromnego policjanta i urodziły jego czarnych synów a za rok powróciły aby dał im córki - a może więcej dzieci

Part 2. Back home Laura finds herself pregnant Ray was higher than a kite I meen really proud. Then Laura had a dark baby and timing fit the vacation time. Ray divorced her she got very little because of prenuptial agreements. She is on welfare. Ted gets fired he and Karen divorce. Ray take 3 marine buddies back to vacation spot they found all the men who took advantage of his wife and made them repay in a way no one would want to. Back home Ray started a new life.

Really really liked your story. Thank you so much for all the time you spent over the years sharing your work. Tremendous effort!

Your IR stories obviously strike a cord with those that have similar interests. See your stories animated into comics has bee a thrill. Please continue to print and share your

wonderful talent.

A couple that my wife and I knew went to Mexico every year for over 10 years. They got robbed the last year they went. The husband my best friend Joe was a hot head and ripped the hotel managers saying he would never be back if they didn't have better security. They went one more year. While out dancing there was a big dark guy that kept hitting on the wife Dana. At first he did dance with Dana with no problems. As the week went on he started the hitting on her but Dana tried to brush it off and blamed the alcohol but she could tell Joe was getting pissed. They skipped one night the went out the last night of thier trip Joe had changed the flight to an earlier flight. While dancing Joe was acting drunk ordering several drinks but was dumping them in a pot that had a big plant in it. When they went to their room Joe was putting on the act and Dana was upset. As they were going in the room the big dark guy approach and help take Joe in laying him on the bed. Then the dude grab Dana and said come with me baby and I will show you a good time she said no but he put his hand on her mouth and took her out of the room. Joe got up and proceeded to follow quietly coming up behind the big guy and kicked him in the privates putting him down then kicked him several more times there and then kicked him in the ribs. Then told Dana we need to put him in the utility room and get to the airport. They made it safely and Joe said they would never return there again.

The most ridiculously racist thing I’ve read

How many woman from spring break age to married woman of all ages go on a relaxing vacation in a Carribbean paradise of anywhere in the world for that matter to unwind and let loose. More drinks, maybe other stuff and before you know it you have a locals dick up your ass. Most will regret it some won’t.. lots of break ups and divorce. I know of plenty of guys also that have fucked locals on trips . For sure thousands of spring breakers in Cancun have taken a Mexican dick . A guy that worked with us from there worked at a hotel and said he got 5-10 a week minimum. A Jamaican dude also worked in a all adults resort and would guck mostly white woman , plenty in front of significant other in a drug drunk fueled party let loose attitude. He said every one at some point was screaming she loved his big fat black dick .

Would like a lot more. A continuation when they return home! It is a story that can run and run!

This reminds me of my boss Jessica named changed to protect her . She went to Aruba with her family when there she got so drunk one night the black bartender got her so drunk that they whined up having unprotected sex she got pregnant with her son Jamal that night. Nine months later she went into labor during a blizzard at are work my other boss was surprised to see the baby was black but I knew you can’t go to a Caribbean island and not expect to have the unexpected happen . My boss now pregnant with her second child while the other boss left the company I found her working at Walmart with a baby bump she said it was her bosses baby but I was believe her

Crazy story. I'm 31 now but here's my 2 cents worth based on three trips to Jamaica

0. There may be plenty of BBC depending on where you live or work, or

1. Leave your husband or boyfriend at home

2. Birth control as in the pill

3. Go to Jamaica with one or more of your girlfriends, at least have a wingwoman

4. There's plenty of BBC at the hotels, beach and bars, relax, be open minded, maybe a gummy helps

5. Relax, everyone's going to get laid, have good time & remember variety is the spice of life

5. Share a suite / adjoining rooms, swap partners with your friend (we did)

6. Have sex with your wingman (we did a 3-some)

7. Don't get burned by the sun, repeat string bikinis are great, but a red burn is a killjoy

8. Take lots of pictures, filter and toss once back home (eg: a BBC in your pussy, its great to vibe to)

9. Get a black ace of spade tattoo on your ankle, mons or wherever, haha

10. Admit you've been blacked, tell your grandma & her friends all about it

I liked the story, a really nice long sexy read, certainly made me wet remembering my first time with a BBC. Kudos for anonymous below and her 2 cents on trips to Jamaica. Nothing wrong with getting laid. 10 stars.

Good story. I've been to three islands, had great times and sex with several local men too, that's called a vacation.

Well if you haven't had sex with a black man, then this is a good story to read with your rabbit nearby, enjoy yourself, cum often. My two cents, if the opportunity presents itself, take it, deep too. Every woman has her secrets, mine...twice. I'd rather be sitting on a park bench or beach when I'm older and seeing some younger man walk by and think, oh yes, omg yes, I remember someone ...

Hmm, honey, I want a BBC in my life.

The next time you see her will be in aisle 14 at Walmart buying diapers for her bastard. She really will enjoy the next 18 years of being a poor and worn out whore for her time in the islands. Oh, and in case you never noticed , the STD rates are through the roof in that area.