All Comments on 'Sin: Insubordination'

Fairly well written, and I hope you write more. I don't care for the humiliation, but maybe that's just me. I give it a 4.

He has no reason to be there. Why accept her torturing him? It makes no sense. I hope he's had his I-phone on and has recorded the entire thing. Send it to all her friends and family. She'll have to leave the area and start anew. What a stupid cow.

Moreover what an unimaginative piece of drivel this was.

Wont tolerate being spoken to in any manner. So he is supposed to be completely silent?

I thought it was hot to the point

And proceeded to beat the snot out of her. Realizing she was using him for some sick fantasy, he left her lying on the floor in a pool of her own blood with the warning to never contact him.