All Comments on 'First Conversion: Crystal'

Good Start interesting character. Look forward to more and longer scen

be good about a short dumb Story written by a racist ?

.....and I look forward to the continuation. Anxious to see where it goes from here.

yet another racist prison fantasy

Nuff said.

You changed her name from krystal to kristen to crystal in the span of 4 sentences. Learn to write

Story didn't make any sense. Learn to write

Great story. Pure fantasy.

So tell me again how this screws over the white man? I only see Kristal being screwed over.