All Comments on 'A Swinging Odyssey Ch. 17'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
A "hmm" episode this one..

Honestly I'm a bit disappointed this time. While I didn't have great expectations on the Peru trip episodes (and instead I got really pleasantly surprised about how you developed the story) I was looking for this one to come and instead found it a bit like a filler. Not a big problem, after 17 episodes isn't easy to find good plots. Anyway, I'm looking forward for the next one, seems interesting.

You're doing a great job.

PimankoPimankoalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Perceptive

You are very perceptive. I am running out of plot ideas (although this happened to me around chapter 6 and then suddenly a few more ideas came to me). As things stand, I will likely end this story with Chapter 20.

I do have another story up my sleeve based on some ideas suggested by a Literotica reader. I promised him I'd develop the story as soon as I finish this one. I intend to keep my promise.

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I have published one book, ghost-written a second, contributed to an anthology, and a number of profession-related articles. All were non-fiction. It is fun to write erotic stories. My hope is that readers enjoy reading my stories as much as I enjoy writing them.

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