All Comments on 'Old World Magic Ch. 23'

GREAT STUFF, THANK YOU FOR SHARING.

GUNRUNNER

Welcome back after a long time away. Nice to have the story continue.

Though I personally think a harem of women is hard to maintain I've a feeling Mike could manage to satisfy a couple more women along with Erin and Cheyenne. I'm eagerly waiting for more of this excellent story.

Still a great story, but with all the pet names and "my love"s between Cheyenne and Erin, Mike seems to have become a third wheel. While Erin did admit to loving him, Cheyenne hasn't really expressed anything other than a need for his cock since they were reunited, which doesn't mean much if she is a sex addict.