by Darksymmetry
Interesting. I would have ended it after "You shed the skin I tame" because that's the best line I've read today, made even better following on the heels of "You smile with all my joy."
I don't think "You...Are...Me." was necessary since it was implied by the title of the poem, and it felt a bit anti-climactic after the dramatic affect of that killer line "You shed the skin I tame."
Enjoyable read, Darksymmetry. Thanks for posting it.