All Comments on 'Handjob Ch. 07'

Not my favorite format, but effective. This struggling wimp needs to run from this slut ASAP. If not his short marriage will be hell and he will have scars the rest of his life!!

The supposed subject is one that interests me, but your writing is the worst I have ever seen from someone over the age of 10. You probably heard some authors somewhere talking about breaking a few of the rules, and still turning out a good piece of work. That does happen, but it doesn't mean you can just go ahead and write when you don't have the first idea how to. There are countless resources online to teach prospective writers; use some of them!

Your attempt here is utterly pathetic in every way!

if you like cuckold stories like dear annony and others you'll love this and all of Cuck's stories

But will always suspect.

Great story very erotic. Love how she plays him