All Comments on 'The Awakening Ch. 41-45'

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WillowRequiem almost 9 years ago

OMG!

I want the next chapters please! This story is amazing! I dont want to even think of the end coming soon!

Anonymousalmost 9 years ago

wow

the story is incredible, but please work on your grammar - especially on prepositions and tenses. It is sometimes very confusing - have you ever heard of homonyms, phrasal verbs and idioms? If you mix them up it changes their meaning... and sabotages a GREAT story

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

Love this story

I have read this story at least 3 times, I love it lol. But I did think it would have been funny if the only thing she remembered was kissing Pronab.. yeah maybe a little innapprpriate but funny.

CalyPy almost 7 years agoAuthor

Hahaha

That would have been a storm of disaster.

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