by SNAGuy
That was one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read on this site and I've been on here almost every day for years. Very touching. You are an excellent writer!
This was a a well written evocative piece taking me back to my own thoughts of my 'times' around the world
Thank you keep up the writing
M
A very well written story, drawing the reader in. The best part? It was erotic, not pornographic. So many writers succumb to their own kinks and spoil a story by taking it too far, beyond the imagination of the reader. Not this writer!
I will have to find the right time to introduce it to my wife. :)
next time let your imagination run wild very well written. tenbears43 keep on trucking.
Very well written. Enjoyable. A bit long, but a beautiful exploration of emotions. Keep on writing, and enticing us with your explorations
Beautifully observed and communicated. Very real. I had a couple of slight continuity stumbles (for example, what became of her skirt, and of those boring undergarments?), but this is a gloriously warm and human piece of work.