All Comments on 'Those Eyes Alone Pt. 02 Ch. 02'

Great update, just wished it was longer. Keaton don't know when to quit.

I had to do a double take when I saw this story was updated! I'm glad you got a chance to update; I know life can get very busy. Anyway, Keaton is going to be a problem. So many people never know when to quit. I take that back, Keaton knows she should quit, but she can't understand why Nathan wants Trys over her. She obviously thinks she's better in every way. But love is love. So many people are like her it's not even funny.

Nathan flipped out, I knew that dude was probably related to Trys. I think Nathan is worse than Trys in the jealous department. I cannot wait for the next update. Please update Venice Lover----Please.........

Oh heck! Just another great story in the making suddenly leaving all readers in limbo!

There should be a mark notifying unfinished stories so the readers could spend their time on something else!!