All Comments on 'Couple's Sexfight'

by BikerT

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Needs major editing

The story is fun but your jumping from past to present tense, along with other grammar issues, rendered the story less pleasurable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
There are no losers!

Maggi got to cum. John got to cum. Peggy orgasmed. Everyone gets to have sex all weekend. What's so bad about being a sex slave? I volunteer. I don't know why they didn't just have a wife swap and fuck each other's brains out all weekend! Why fight in the first place? I am a lover, not a fighter.

BikerTBikerTalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Needs major editing

Thank you very much for your comment. .

BikerTBikerTalmost 9 years agoAuthor
There are no losers!

Of course there are no losers. But for us this game adds to the excitement. Thank you for your comment.

DominicNicoleDominicNicoleover 8 years ago
Excellent Story

Will you be chronicling the fun weekend you guys had? Maybe a rematch ora match against a different couple?

BikerTBikerTover 8 years agoAuthor
Excellent Story

Thank you for your comment. Right now I am working on the second fight. I hope that soon will be posted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great.

I loved this story. Keep it up. Great topic and it was easy to follow.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous