All Comments on 'Cheerleader's Mom: A Power Shift'

Found this site a few weeks ago and your stories are out of this world. Slowly getting through all your work

Definitly need part 2

great story ......i want more!

Love the first part of the story What will happen in part two

Love and Kisses Ms Heather

I always look forward to reading your stories and I'm never disappointed. I love picturing myself in the submissive position and being 48 with older daughters, it's easy to do with your stories. Thank you for providing me some great alone time, 😘.

Loved it

Is I didn't believe for a minute that she wouldn't stand up and simply bitch slap her daughter and walk out. Is the daughter really willing to take the chance Mom ends up throwing her out of the house? Stupid story.

I still would like to see the Mistresses in your stories eat pussy as well , they should because i think the slaves need to have that happen otherwise why stay a slave . Also now that since you started to now lesbian relationships are becoming normal ( as they are normal ) is the whole blackmail in your stories going to change ? as i think if a 16 to 18 year girl got found eating pussy she wouldnt care if someone outed her today

Oh you have to keep this story going. It was great!

wow can't wait to read lots more of this keep up the great work

More stories like this. Only wish I was there to lick your pussy.

Jill

More Please. That was fucking hot.

Don't get me wrong. This story was hot as hell. But your title said power shift. The stotory mentioned several times the daughter was domineering and bitchy. And the mom did what she was told anyway. So really there wasn't a power shift. There was just a strengthening of that power. I know that's nitpicking. Cause this story was really hot! More please.

Super hot story. I'm really looking forward to reading about the mothers upcoming training.

This story is really hot! Can't wait for the sequel! I just hope that it will focus only on the incest part and only lesbian scenes, without boyfriend-mom or gangbang by guys parts.

Hi all,

Thanks for the support and comments.

Unlike most of my stories, I have already written the next 4 parts and have at least 5 more planned.

As for requests... it will be mostly lesbian and a lot of incest, but the parts get longer and with many more pictures.

That said, her husband will make a couple/few appearances too.

Part two hopefully out late October or early November.

Reality is that illustrated stories take longer to get published because of the extra work it takes Laurel.

Jasmine

But if all goes well... new chapters about every 6-8 weeks...

Sequel.

Of course we want more, your stories are amazing! This just tops the cake!

Yet another fantastic story as usual. Keep them coming.

I loved this story. I am ready for part two. If it is too late could you put white nylons on one of the slut mommy pets? There is nothing that excites me more than having white thigh highs surrounding my head while eating a delicious pussy.

I am a bit curious if the pictures were done with Sims 4, or was it with an art program? I know Sims 2 had some very intersting adult mods which allowed for scenes similar to these and far more graphic. I do not know if they have mods of this nature for Sims 4, but last I knew Sims 2 was the version which had the most game mods of this sort.

It is just curiosity which prompts me to ask. I love many of your stories. Stockings are a love of mine. I also enjoy the lesbian incest stories. I prefer those with a dominant mom much more, but it is because I would love to have a mommy force or coerce me down on my knees to lick her pussy.

Great story, my god the dialogue. So naughty, so wrong, so unbelievably hot. Loved it. Though the images were great as well. I really hope and want the sequel, this story seems to just be the beginning!

In the story you say the mom is 39 and was head cheerleader in the 80's. Not possible. If she was head cheerleader at 17 in 1989 let's say, that would make her 27 in '99 and 37 in '09. Other than that, I enjoyed the story.

Great story, and excellent beginning. Can't wait to read more. Your stories always delight me and you are one of the best writers on this site and particularly in this genre. As for the picky posters - get a life or start writing stories yourself, if you believe you know so much. It's fiction and, as in Star Wars and other entertainment on tv and at movies, the author has latitude to make the story their way. If it doesn't fit your mode - don't read it, Jerks.

HOW ABOUT ADDING KIM'S MOM TO THE MIX AND ALLIE'S TEACHER?

A woman's face between another woman's legs, priceless. I think her husband could add to the fun in someway, Michelle will have to bring him along at a slower man's pace. Imagine all the fun we can have with her if we don't need to hide. *~*

I love you, and your story's

Fuck I wish I was eating her cunt and licking both them out. I came thinking about it.

Mke

Literotica (I also follow you on twitter when you do post). I have mentioned before that I am a Leatherman and heavily involved in a Leather lifestyle with my Mistress wife (the Mistress/wife part is not something that I have mentioned before in a post). Many of the things in your stories I look at and my reaction is "seriously????". Then I remind myself that this is fantasy or even sometimes based at least in part on reality. That being said in all my years there are a couple of "hot buttons" that get my attention. One you touched on in this story and One you touched on in "Bedding the Babysitter" (which by the way I LOVED!!! Especially how Ms Megan handled Karen when she got out of line). So for those out there that think "50 Shades of Grey (which many of us think is a joke) is the BDSM bible. Here is a little wisdom to file away. In the story you wrote:

***"Originally, I was going to make the scene end in a three-way, but after much consideration I went with a popular philosophy of mine... the MISTRESS doesn't eat the pussy of the SUBMISSIVE. Thus, although I loved this photo it had to go."***

(Note: I am not in any way trying to argue your philosophy as I have absolutely ZERO right to do that, and I respect your philosophy as your own!)

The wisdom is this, if you are a Mistress or Master, then you have the power to do as you see fit. If you LIKE to eat pussy or suck dick, then DO IT!! Don't not do something because someone says eating your slaves pussy or sucking your slaves dick shows submission to that slave. When you, in a power exchange relationship does something because YOU want to do it, then you are submitting to no one. I am amazed at the number of people in a power exchange relationship that will not do something they like because it "appears" to be submissive?????

Anyway, just my own musings about the story.

Slave Ed (yes, that is how I identify in the Leather World)

I am not into 'power exchange' relationships but this caught my attention:

......people in a power exchange relationship that will not do something they like because it "appears" to be submissive.....

When you let others tell you what to do or what not do you are submitting to them.

What kind of dominant are you if you are letting others tell you what you are allowed to do?

I loved the story. I also agree with your philosophy, 'the mistress doesn't eat the subs pussy'. Your choice of pictures was also spot on, at the very least, the sub should always wear thigh-highs.

Excellent story, good pace and Michelle's attempt to regain control fit the story beautifully. The illustrations are great, as well. Thank you!

This story is just...omg!

Great story. Next make Kim’s mother suffer more, show her fighting her morals and slow losing. Then almost regains her dignity. Puts fear in her daughters mind. But a major event, trauma - sends her back to her daughters arms.

I normally avoid illustrated stories because either the writing or art is off. When I saw who the author was I decided to give it a shot, I was very pleased by the outcome. Looking forward to the rest of the series

I loved it! Very descriptive and highly erotic!

I felt like the mom gave in really easily but still fun 4 stars

I thoroughly enjoy stories that center on a younger woman dominating an older woman. This story did not disappoint. I look forward to reading the remaining chapters!

THESE are the kind of stories you were born to write; your forte' as it were! The illustrations actually added to the appeal (tho I don't usually care one way or the other about illustrated stories.) Good stuff!

~B

starting out to be very sexy

cant wait to see whats next

great writing

thank you

This is the first story that's made me squirt while reading it! Love it

I’ve read quite a few of your stories Stockings, and I have to say I love them. You write like I’m reading a fantasy, right out of your dirty mind. Love it. And the pictures give me another tool to spur on my own orgasm.

I stumbled upon this story, not knowing exactly what kind it was.

I have read quite a few of your stories, and have enjoyed most of them, but this one is not one that I enjoyed.

I was waiting for Allie to get what's coming to her. She's such a little cunt,

Most little cunts meet there match and Allie sure needs to get into a situation where there's payback for being a cunt

I'd definitely like for you to write a story about the payback of Allie and what kind of payback she gets

One thing that you could have happen to her is that her father finds out what she has done to her mother and spanks her, then fucks her and knocks her up

This would be a truly fitting punishment for her, since she's such a little cunt and deserves a punishment like this

Knowing that she's knocked up and has her father's baby inside of her from a incest relationship with her father might be exactly what she needs to change her from being a little cunt to being a little mommy

Silks this is only a suggestion. There's so many things that could happen to her for punishment of being a little cunt and Allie is the ultimate little cunt

Well written story I guess, but I’m not a fan of dominant/submissive narratives especially the role reversal type where a mother becomes submissive to a daughter., especially a bitch daughter. Although it doesn’t seem like the direction this story is heading, I’d like to see Allie get her comeuppance by having her mom take the phone with the pictures and then have the father get involved by seeing Allie naked, fucking her and maybe making her credit.

Wonderful story and you should so honored that you daughter accepted you as her sub. Honored andnot humiliated. oK

179 This story has possibilities, enough people that it could be very sexy. I think I saw that there were six episodes, so it has a long way to go. Lookin forward to more. Thanks. Looks like I read it previously.

I love so, so many of your stories, but most of all the

Mommy slut, daughter Domme ones.

Good story, Good artwork and an abundance of Pussy Hair, is always a (5) Rating!!!!!!!!

Razor burn and stubble with pimples (thank you for not doing this) is always nasty and rating of 1 or 2 only if it is a great story. Keep ladies Hairy, silkstockingslover!!!

Gave it three stars. Good D/s fantasy. I generally do not like Kids Dom's/parents subs or the other way around. I would like to read that Allie gets her turn as a sub, to her father. (also mentioned in a comment).