All Comments on 'An Orc's Slave Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great

It's a great story I have follow this series from the first chapter it have all been great but it would be even better if you could make them longer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Nice. I like the progression of their relationship - how much Bologal guesses about his state of mind is up for grabs, but he doesn't seem to know his own mind very well at this point, either. I'm guessing he's actually going to betray Ebba, rationalizing it as not wanting to risk everything on an imperfect escape plan with a thieving partner who might well just be using him to get the keys - once he turns her in, Bologal will trust him even more, and his eventual escape will be even easier.

That's pretty much the same logic he used to justify sucking her cock last night, after all. I wonder how far he'll take it...?

AlnameAlnameover 8 years ago

Really hoping he doesn't escape and instead betrays Ebba.

Being discovered now will really mess up his sorta blooming relationship with Bologal.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I too hope that Thomas betrays Ebba. The relationship between him and Bologal, and its development, is very interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Feel like he should betray her and watch her get usedu

the_specialistthe_specialistover 8 years ago
awesome

I like how the story is progressing. I like how because he was a good little slave she went easier on him and it would be alittle interesting to see a futadom story get alittle intimate and romancy rather then all rape all the time. Maybe he and ebba get caught and he tells his mistress she made him do it and he gets to cut and his mistress surprisingly shows alittle worry for him or something along those lines. Keep up the amazing work

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