All Comments on 'Tak'Lon- Transformed Man'

Then post this trash in Sci/fi where someone might want to read it. Then get an understandable plot. Then try to put some cleverness or originality into the story. This was awful.

Thanks for the originality. I enjoyed the read. 5*

This was fantastic, a great read that was both sexy and humorous. Loved the style of it, and it has fitting tags.

This story is quite similar to the novel THE REASSEMBLED MAN. Is this a tribute?

Thanks for reading and enjoying the story... if you did.

Anonymous 10-6-15- it is pretty clearly intended as a humor entry, so it is in the right place. Plotline? Lots of others understood it apparently- perhaps this is a 'user error'? Needs editing? Can you provide any helpful examples? It's hard to take an anonymous post like this seriously when it is just unhelpful mudslinging.

I will be your willing reader-slave for any future ones you post.

In fact, I think I've read them all a couple of times.

I'm a bodybuilder with a bit of a male and female muscle fetish and really appreciate how you tend to make both the males and females of your stories "ideal" persons. So many stories with this particular fetish tend to be exclusively m/m or female giantess/domination things, which are great for what they are, but not for me.

Thanks for your work!