by ParisWife
The violence of rape doesn't lend itself to a sexy or erotic story. UGH!
Here we go again criticizing the author for writing about non consent in the non consent section! I truly don't get it! Anyway I found it to be well written and arousing so there
I loved it. The description of the sensations is what I am ALWAYS looking for.
Backdrop story of Savannah's father having strangled Neff's mother during rough sex?!;))Neff's mother had to compromise to becoming Savannah's father's Mistress?!;))
And so...not even being able to touch a hair of the real offender,the 'Dad'....the innocent daughter is defiled through a humiliating gangbang and deserted!!....Your actual offender deserving revenge still walks free having his own kinda gala times!!;)) So where is the knock out punch revenge your beloved mother deserves,Neff?!;))
Perhaps the writer could have added one or two chapters more to make the story look truly complete!! ;)) this looks so incomplete!!!.....
I enjoyed it, but like several others felt it was missing some more of the story. How does "Neff" get is revenge on her dad? Videoing it? At this point it's unknown. I gave it 4 stars, as it lost a full point for no ending. Finish The Damn Story!!!